U.S. History Teachers Using Farewell to Manzanar: Grading Historical Writing

Published on September 20th, 2026 by the GraideMind team

In a U.S. history class, Farewell to Manzanar serves a different purpose than it does in English. Students are not mainly asked to analyze style. They are asked to understand a historical event through one person's account and to think about how that account relates to the larger record.

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That shifts what you assess. The key skills are contextualization, sourcing, and using evidence to support a historical argument. A student who summarizes the memoir well but never connects it to the broader policy has only done part of the task.

The memoir has clear connections to the wider story. Executive Order 9066 set the policy in motion, roughly 120,000 people were removed from the West Coast, and Manzanar was one of ten camps. Houston's account gives students a human view of those numbers.

A good prompt asks students to bring both levels together. For instance, "How does Houston's memoir illustrate the impact of government policy on individual families?" requires students to name the policy and use a personal example.

Assessing historical thinking

Historical writing rubrics often include context, evidence, analysis, and sourcing. Adapt them to a memoir by asking students to comment on the author's position, since Houston wrote decades after the events. A student who notes that the 1973 publication date shapes the perspective is thinking like a historian.

  • Context: places the memoir in the timeline from Pearl Harbor to the camps' closing
  • Evidence: uses specific scenes and accurate historical facts
  • Sourcing: comments on who wrote the memoir, when, and why it matters
  • Analysis: explains how personal experience relates to government policy
  • Argument: takes a clear position supported by the evidence

A memoir is a source to be questioned, not just a story to be summarized.

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Watching for factual accuracy

Historical essays require accuracy in ways literary ones may not. Students may mix up dates, confuse the camps, or misstate who was affected. A short reference sheet with key facts reduces avoidable errors.

Be clear about terminology too. Discuss why many scholars prefer terms like incarceration over relocation, and let students know what language you expect in their writing. Consistent vocabulary shows thoughtful engagement with the subject.

Balancing writing skill and content

History teachers often worry about grading writing quality alongside content. A student with strong knowledge but weak sentences should not be lost in the shuffle. Keep separate lines on the rubric so each skill is visible.

Teachers who lack time for detailed writing feedback can lean on tools. GraideMind applies a history rubric to student essays and drafts comments on evidence and argument, which the teacher reviews. That lets a history teacher give writing feedback without becoming a full-time editor.

Collaborating with English colleagues

If your school teaches the memoir in both English and history, coordinate. Share rubrics, align vocabulary, and agree on how to handle overlapping assignments. Students benefit from consistent expectations across classes.

A joint assignment can even count in both courses, with each teacher grading the skills from their own subject. It reduces duplication and helps students see the connection between disciplines. Those partnerships tend to produce some of the most memorable work of the year.

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