Teaching Argumentative Writing Through Prejudice in Davi
Published on September 29th, 2026 by the GraideMind team
Argumentative writing is easier to teach when students care about the question, and few questions feel more immediate to teenagers than how groups treat outsiders. Davi by Roy C. Booth and Brian Woods places a human blacksmith among dwarves who have been enemies of his people for generations, and readers watch him find acceptance where he expected hostility. Reviewers have described the book as a story about racism, prejudice, and bigotry, which gives teachers a ready-made entry point.

The challenge is keeping the discussion grounded in the text. Students can drift into general opinions about prejudice that never touch the novella, which produces essays that sound sincere but cannot be assessed against any standard. A good unit design requires every claim to be tied to something specific that happens in the story.
Fantasy also offers a helpful distance from real-world conflicts. Because the disagreement between humans and dwarves is invented, students are often more willing to analyze motives and consequences honestly. Teachers can then help them transfer those analytical habits to nonfiction arguments later in the year.
Building a defensible claim from story evidence
Start by asking students to write a claim about how prejudice functions in the novella rather than whether it is bad. A claim such as "the elders' distrust of the dwarves persists because it is inherited rather than tested" requires evidence and interpretation, while "prejudice is wrong" requires neither. Modeling the difference with two or three sample claims on the board helps students see what a debatable thesis looks like.
- Identify one moment where humans assume the worst about dwarves.
- Find one moment where the dwarves respond differently than expected.
- Explain what changes for Davi as he spends time in the dwarven kingdom.
- Consider whether the village or the dwarves change more by the end.
- Write a claim that answers what the story suggests about overcoming distrust.
Students argue better when the evidence is on the page and the opinion is earned.
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Counterargument is the skill students find hardest, and this novella offers useful material for practicing it. A student arguing that the dwarves are more accepting than the humans must still address moments where the dwarves also hold suspicions or set difficult tests. Asking students to find the strongest evidence against their own claim and respond to it produces noticeably stronger essays.
A short in-class exercise can make this concrete. Pair students with opposing claims, have them swap evidence lists, and require each to write one paragraph that acknowledges the other side before rebutting it. The paragraphs are short enough to grade quickly and reveal exactly who understands how counterargument works.
Grading claims, evidence, and reasoning
A claim-evidence-reasoning framework fits argumentative essays well because each part can be scored separately. Claims are judged on clarity and whether they can be debated, evidence on accuracy and relevance, and reasoning on how well the writer explains the link between the two. Separating these prevents a well-written essay with weak reasoning from scoring higher than it deserves.
Feedback should name the specific gap rather than saying "needs more support." A comment such as "you quote the elders' request but do not explain why it shows distrust" tells the student what to add and where. AI-assisted grading tools can draft comments like this at scale, letting the teacher edit for tone and accuracy instead of typing each one from scratch.
Keeping discussion respectful and productive
Because the topic touches on real experiences of exclusion, teachers may want to set discussion norms before the unit begins. Students should know they are analyzing characters and choices, not judging classmates, and that disagreement is expected when the claims are backed by evidence. Clear norms make it easier to have candid conversations without anyone feeling singled out.
Finally, consider ending the unit with a reflection that connects the argument to students' own reading of the world. A brief prompt asking what the story suggests about how communities decide who belongs invites personal thinking without demanding personal disclosure. It also gives teachers one more short writing sample to assess.
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