A Peer Review Activity for Sula Essays That Improves Drafts
Published on September 30th, 2026 by the GraideMind team
Peer review can dramatically improve student essays, but unstructured sessions often devolve into vague praise or surface corrections. Students may not know what to look for or how to phrase feedback constructively. A guided activity gives them a framework for analyzing a draft and offering useful suggestions. When done well, peer review also helps reviewers strengthen their own writing.

Begin by teaching students what good feedback looks like. Show examples of comments that are vague, such as this is good, and comments that are specific, such as your thesis claims that Morrison critiques community judgment but the second paragraph focuses on Eva. Discuss how the second comment helps the writer. Practicing with anonymous sample paragraphs builds the skill before students review each other's work.
Provide a review form that mirrors your rubric. Ask reviewers to identify the thesis and rate its clarity, find two pieces of evidence and assess their relevance, and point to a spot where the analysis could go deeper. Requiring them to quote from the draft keeps feedback grounded. This structure ensures that every review addresses the most important elements.
Structuring the session
Plan for about twenty to thirty minutes per round. Partners exchange drafts and read silently, then complete the review form. They then discuss their comments in pairs, with the writer asking questions and taking notes. This sequence allows time for reflection and conversation, which improves the quality of feedback.
- Identify the thesis and restate it in your own words
- Mark one piece of evidence that works well and explain why
- Point to one place where the analysis needs more explanation
- Suggest one change to organization or transitions
- Ask one question that the essay does not yet answer
Students learn to revise their own work by learning to read someone else's critically.
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Pair students thoughtfully, balancing skill levels and personalities. Some teachers pair strong writers with developing ones, while others keep partners at similar levels so that each gets equal challenge. Whichever approach you choose, monitor sessions and intervene when conversations stall. Reinforce norms of respect and specificity.
Be aware that students may be hesitant to criticize peers. Normalize constructive critique by framing it as a service to the writer. Remind them that every writer benefits from outside eyes, including professional authors. Modeling a supportive tone yourself sets the standard.
Connecting peer review to revision
Peer review should lead directly to revision. Require students to submit a short reflection explaining which suggestions they adopted and why. This accountability ensures that the feedback is used. It also gives you insight into how students interpret and apply comments.
Your own feedback can then focus on higher-level issues that peers may miss. Because the draft has already been improved through peer input, you can spend less time on basic problems. Some teachers supplement with AI-assisted tools that provide rubric-based suggestions for students to consider, always with teacher oversight. This layered approach makes good use of everyone's time.
Evaluating the activity
After the session, ask students what they found helpful and what could be improved. Their responses can reveal whether the form was clear and whether partnerships worked well. Adjust accordingly for future rounds. Continuous refinement makes peer review increasingly effective.
Look at the quality of final drafts compared to initial versions to gauge the impact. If improvements are visible, share examples with the class to reinforce the value. Celebrating revision teaches students that writing is a process. Over time, the habit carries into other courses and assignments.
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