Opinion Writing About The Nose: An Argument Rubric for Young Students
Published on September 28th, 2026 by the GraideMind team
Opinion writing is a staple of the elementary and middle school curriculum, and a quirky story like Cowan's The Nose is a great launching point. Students can argue whether the story is more silly or more serious, whether the Deputy Inspector deserved his trouble, or whether the ending felt right. Their opinions will vary widely, which is part of the fun. The grading task is to evaluate how well they argue, not which side they take.

Young writers often confuse opinion with preference. Saying "I liked this story" is a preference, and while it is honest, it does not give a reader much to work with. An opinion in an academic sense makes a claim that can be supported, such as arguing that the story is funny because a very ordinary man faces a very strange problem. Teaching that shift is the heart of the unit.
Because there is no single right answer, the rubric must focus on the structure of the argument. That means looking at whether there is a clear claim, whether reasons back it up, and whether the reasons connect to the text. When teachers grade agreement with their own view, students learn to guess what the teacher thinks. Grading the reasoning teaches them to think.
Teaching Claims and Reasons
A claim is a statement that someone could reasonably disagree with. Students should practice writing claims and then testing them by asking whether a classmate could argue the opposite. A reason is why the claim is true, and evidence is the detail from the story that shows it. Modeling the claim, reason, evidence sequence with a shared example gives students a pattern to follow.
- Claim: the student states a clear opinion that can be supported
- Reasons: the student gives at least two reasons that support the claim
- Evidence: each reason is backed by a detail from the story
- Organization: the piece has an introduction, body, and closing that restates the claim
- Language: the student uses linking words such as because, for example, and therefore
An opinion becomes an argument when the writer shows the reader why it makes sense.
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Keep the rubric simple and age-appropriate. For younger students, three rows are often enough: a clear claim, reasons with story details, and a closing that ties back to the claim. For older students, add rows for anticipating a different viewpoint and for strength of reasoning. Describe each level in words a student could read and understand.
Treat the strength of reasons carefully. A reason like "because it is funny" repeats the claim rather than supporting it, while "because the nose acts like a person walking around town" gives the reader something to consider. Give examples of weak and strong reasons in class and on the rubric. Students improve when they can see the difference.
Feedback on Weak Reasons
The most common weakness is a reason that only restates the claim. A helpful comment asks a question, such as "What in the story shows this?" Students then look back at the text and find a detail. This turns a circular statement into a supported one.
Another weakness is evidence that is accurate but does not connect to the reason. Point this out gently by asking how the detail proves the point. Students often realize the connection is missing and revise. That reflective step is where the learning happens.
Scoring Fairly When You Disagree
Every teacher will occasionally read an opinion they find unconvincing or even silly. Set your own views aside and evaluate whether the student did what the rubric asks. A student who argues that the nose is the real hero of the story, and supports it well, has earned a high score. Modeling openness to different views also teaches students to respect other perspectives.
If you use an AI tool for first-pass scoring, tell it explicitly to evaluate reasoning rather than agree or disagree with the position. Check a few outputs on unusual opinions to ensure it treats them fairly. Automated tools can be a useful safeguard against a teacher's unconscious preferences, provided they are configured well. Combining human and software review supports fairness for every student.
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