Grading Argumentative Essays on The Kite Runner: Is Amir Truly Redeemed?
Published on September 18th, 2026 by the GraideMind team
Argumentative writing asks students to take a side and defend it, and The Kite Runner supplies plenty of things worth arguing about. Is Amir a coward or a boy caught in a situation beyond him? Does he redeem himself in the end, or does the novel suggest that some debts cannot be repaid? These questions have no single answer, which is exactly why they work.

Grading them requires a slightly different mindset than a standard literary analysis. The job is not to check whether the student reached the right conclusion but whether they built a sound case. A well-reasoned essay arguing that Amir is not redeemed deserves the same credit as one arguing that he is.
Many students find this liberating, and some find it unsettling. They are used to hunting for what the teacher wants. Making it clear that you are grading reasoning, evidence, and structure helps them commit to a real position.
A useful rubric for this assignment includes a claim, support, counterargument, and rebuttal, plus the usual writing conventions. Each of these can be described at multiple levels, from a claim that is merely stated to one that is precise and defensible.
The counterargument problem
The counterargument is where most essays fall short. Students either skip it, mention it in a single sentence, or set up a weak opposing view they can easily defeat. Strong essays engage the best version of the other side, using textual evidence, and then explain why their own reading still holds.
- A clear, debatable claim that goes beyond stating that Amir feels guilty
- Evidence from more than one part of the novel to support the position
- A fair statement of the strongest opposing reading
- A rebuttal that uses the text rather than simply asserting the student is right
- A conclusion that considers what the argument means for the novel as a whole
The best argumentative essays are not the loudest ones, they are the ones that take the other side seriously.
Stop spending your evenings grading essays
Let AI generate rubric-based feedback instantly, so you can focus on teaching instead.
Try it free in secondsFeedback that sharpens reasoning
Comments that ask a skeptical question work well. "How would someone who thinks Amir is redeemed respond to this?" makes a student consider a counterposition without telling them what it is. Follow-up questions in a second draft often produce a noticeably stronger essay.
Watch for claims that outrun the evidence. A student may write that Amir never changes at all, when the text plainly shows him taking risks late in the story. A note asking for evidence that matches the scale of the claim helps tighten the argument.
Being fair to positions you disagree with
Teachers have their own views of the novel, and it is easy to reward the essays that agree with them. A rubric that scores reasoning independently of conclusion is the best safeguard. It gives you a structure to return to when a persuasive essay reaches an unexpected position.
Rubric-based AI feedback can reinforce that discipline. Because a tool like GraideMind scores against the written criteria, not against a favored reading, it supports the principle that a well-supported argument earns credit whichever side it takes.
Turning argument skills outward
The skills students practice here, making a claim, weighing an alternative, and responding with evidence, apply well beyond English class. Naming that transfer in your feedback helps students see why the assignment matters.
A novel that invites real disagreement is a gift for teaching argument. Grading it fairly keeps that invitation honest.
See how fast your grading workflow can be
Most teachers go from hours per batch to minutes.
Create free account