Grading Argumentative Essays on "Attention Must Be Paid"

Published on September 17th, 2026 by the GraideMind team

Linda's speech to her sons, insisting that "attention must be paid" to a man like Willy, is quotable enough that students reach for it constantly, sometimes without fully engaging with what she is actually arguing in that moment. The line invites an essay prompt, but it also invites shallow restatement disguised as analysis.

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A strong essay on this prompt has to grapple with an uncomfortable question the line raises: is Linda right that Willy deserves this attention, given how he has treated her and how his choices have shaped his sons' lives? A student who simply agrees with Linda without examining the tension has not actually engaged the prompt.

The most interesting essays complicate Linda's claim, arguing that her demand for attention is itself part of the problem, since it asks the family to keep protecting Willy from consequences rather than confronting the truth about his choices and failures.

Grading criteria should reward this kind of complication explicitly, since a purely sympathetic reading of Linda's speech, while defensible, is the easier and more common essay to write.

What the Speech Actually Argues

Linda's full speech is longer than the famous line alone, and it makes a specific claim: that ordinary people deserve the same dignity in their suffering as anyone else, that being unremarkable does not mean being disposable. Essays that only quote the famous fragment, without engaging the fuller argument, tend to miss this nuance.

  • Does the essay quote beyond just the single famous line?
  • Is Linda's argument about dignity distinguished from simple pity?
  • Does the essay address whether the family actually follows through on her demand?
  • Is there engagement with how Biff and Happy each respond differently to her speech?
  • Does the essay avoid treating the line as if it settles the play's meaning on its own?

The most quoted line in a play is often the one students understand least precisely.

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Teaching Close Reading of a Famous Passage

Because this speech is so widely quoted outside the context of the play itself, students sometimes bring in a vague cultural familiarity with the line rather than a close reading of the actual passage. A useful classroom exercise has students annotate the full speech line by line before writing, to counteract this.

This annotation step tends to produce essays with noticeably more specific textual engagement than skipping straight to drafting from memory of a class discussion weeks earlier.

Grading the Counterargument Fairly

Essays that push back on Linda's framing, arguing that her demand enables rather than helps Willy, deserve full credit if well supported, even though this reading runs against the emotional grain of the speech itself. Grading should reward argument quality over whether the essay lands on the more sympathetic or more critical reading.

Being explicit with students that both readings can earn full marks, provided they are well supported, encourages more honest and less performative writing.

Why This Prompt Still Resonates

Decades after the play premiered, the question of what ordinary struggle deserves in terms of recognition and dignity has not become less relevant, which is part of why this speech continues to anchor strong essay prompts. Students writing about it today are often, without fully realizing it, writing about questions that extend well past the Loman household.

That contemporary resonance is worth naming explicitly in class discussion before the essay is assigned, since it tends to raise the stakes students feel about getting the argument right.

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