Victim or Agent? Grading Argumentative Essays on Lily Bart's Choices
Published on September 23rd, 2026 by the GraideMind team
Asking students whether Lily Bart is primarily a victim of her social circumstances or an agent whose own choices drive her downfall is one of the most reliable ways to generate genuinely engaged, well-argued essays about this novel, since students tend to have real opinions about the question once they understand its stakes. Grading these essays fairly requires resisting any personal preference for one side of the debate and instead focusing entirely on how well each student supports their chosen position with specific, accurate textual evidence, regardless of which argument they ultimately make.

The strongest essays on either side of this debate acknowledge the genuine force of the opposing position before making their case, since the novel provides substantial evidence for both readings and a one-sided essay that ignores inconvenient counter-evidence tends to feel less persuasive than one that engages honestly with complexity. An essay arguing Lily is primarily a victim should still address the moments where she makes choices that actively work against her own interests, explaining why those choices do not undermine the victim reading rather than simply ignoring them.
Similarly, an essay arguing Lily bears significant responsibility for her own downfall through her choices should grapple honestly with the severely limited range of options actually available to an unmarried woman of her class and era, rather than judging her decisions as though she operated with the same freedom a reader might assume. Essays that fail to account for this historical context when making the "agent" argument often end up sounding anachronistic or unfairly harsh toward a character operating within genuinely narrow constraints.
Building a Rubric That Does Not Favor Either Side
A rubric for this assignment needs to be carefully worded so that it rewards strength of argument rather than implicitly favoring one interpretation over the other, since even small wording choices in a rubric can unintentionally signal that one reading is preferred. Testing the rubric against a strong sample essay from each side of the debate before applying it to the full class set helps catch any unintended bias and ensures both positions can earn full marks if argued well.
- A clear, defensible position on the victim-agent question, supported by specific and accurate textual evidence
- Honest engagement with the strongest evidence for the opposing interpretation, not just a one-sided case
- Historical awareness of the actual constraints facing an unmarried woman of Lily's class and era
- Avoidance of anachronistic judgment that holds Lily to standards or freedoms she did not actually have
- A nuanced conclusion that may acknowledge the debate's genuine complexity rather than overclaiming certainty
The strongest argument on either side is the one that takes the opposing evidence seriously.
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Running an in-class debate or structured discussion on this question before assigning the essay helps students hear the strongest version of both positions from their peers, which tends to produce more balanced, more thoroughly considered essays than if students simply form an opinion in isolation. Even a short, informal debate exercise surfaces counter-arguments that students can then address directly in their written essays, strengthening the overall quality of the class set a teacher will eventually grade.
This kind of preparation also helps identify students who are struggling to form a clear position at all, giving a teacher the chance to offer additional guidance before the formal writing process begins rather than only discovering confusion once a weak, unfocused essay has already been submitted for a grade.
Handling the Full Range of Responses
Because this prompt allows for genuinely divided responses, teachers can expect roughly even numbers of essays arguing each side, along with some that attempt a synthesis position arguing Lily is meaningfully both victim and agent depending on which moment in the novel is being examined. This synthesis position, when well-argued and specific rather than simply hedging to avoid taking a stance, often represents some of the most sophisticated thinking a class produces and should be graded accordingly on its own merits.
Grading a class set with this much genuine variety requires staying anchored to the rubric's core criteria rather than comparing essays primarily to one another, since essays taking opposite positions are not directly comparable in the way essays answering a more narrowly defined prompt might be. Keeping the rubric visible and returning to it consistently throughout the grading session helps maintain this fairness across every essay in the stack.
Why This Question Endures as a Teaching Tool
The victim-agent debate about Lily Bart has occupied literary critics for over a century, which is part of why it works so well as a student assignment: there is no simple, settled answer to memorize, only a genuinely open question that rewards careful, evidence-based argument. Grading these essays well, with real attention to argument quality rather than personal agreement, teaches students that literary criticism is a field of ongoing interpretation rather than a search for predetermined correct answers.
This kind of assignment, done well, produces some of the most memorable and most genuinely revealing writing a class will produce on this novel, since students tend to invest real intellectual energy into a question they find genuinely debatable rather than merely academic. That investment is worth honoring with equally careful, evidence-focused grading in return.
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