Grading Ethical Dilemma Essays: Should the Boys Report What They Found?
Published on October 11th, 2026 by the GraideMind team
The boys in The Body set out to find a missing boy's body, and the story invites questions about what is right and wrong in the choices they make. An ethical dilemma essay asks students to take a position on a moral question and defend it using evidence from the text. Prompts might ask whether the boys should have told adults what they found, or how they should have handled the pressure from older boys. These questions give students a chance to practice reasoning about values while staying anchored in the story.

A good ethical prompt presents a real dilemma in which more than one position can be defended. Students should consider the characters' motives, the consequences of their actions, and the values at stake, such as honesty, loyalty, and responsibility. Essays that simply declare a choice right or wrong without weighing considerations tend to be shallow. The best essays explain why a hard decision is hard.
Teachers should be clear that the essay is graded on reasoning, not on the position taken. A student who argues that the boys acted wisely deserves the same credit as one who argues they acted wrongly, if the reasoning and evidence are equally strong. Stating this openly encourages honest thinking rather than guessing what the teacher wants to hear. It also builds a classroom culture that respects differing views.
Elements of Strong Moral Reasoning
Strong ethical essays identify the competing values, explain the consequences of different choices, and consider the perspectives of the people involved. They avoid judging characters by modern standards without acknowledging the setting and time period. They also recognize the limits of the characters' knowledge, since the boys are young and acting on incomplete information. This kind of reasoning shows empathy and rigor.
- A clear position that answers the dilemma stated in the prompt.
- Identification of the values in tension, such as honesty, loyalty, and fear of punishment.
- Specific moments from the story that show the characters' motives and options.
- Consideration of the consequences of the choice for the characters and for others.
- A fair treatment of the opposing view before explaining why the writer still holds the position.
Moral reasoning is strongest when the writer can explain why a reasonable person might choose differently.
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Ethical essays can drift into abstract philosophy or personal opinion, so the rubric should require textual evidence. Students should point to how the story presents the characters' thoughts and options, not just state what they would do in the same position. Linking each reason to a scene keeps the essay anchored. This also makes grading more consistent, since evidence can be checked.
Teachers can help by providing a short organizer that asks students to list the options available to the characters, the possible consequences of each, and the values involved. Filling in the organizer before writing helps students think through the dilemma systematically. It also gives the teacher a quick way to see where understanding breaks down. The organizer can be collected as part of the process.
Handle Strong Opinions Fairly
Students may hold strong views on questions of right and wrong, and some will disagree with the teacher or with classmates. Grading should focus on the quality of reasoning and avoid penalizing positions for being unpopular. Teachers should watch for their own biases and consider having a colleague review a few essays on the other side of the question. Fairness in grading models the open-mindedness the assignment values.
Class discussion before writing can help students refine their views and hear other perspectives. A structured activity, such as a line of agreement where students stand according to their position, makes the range of opinions visible. Students can then explain their reasoning to someone who disagrees. This practice often leads to more thoughtful essays.
Support Language and Organization
Argument essays require specific language, such as phrases for expressing opinions, giving reasons, and acknowledging other views. English learners benefit from a list of these phrases and examples of how to use them. Teachers can also model a paragraph that weighs two values before reaching a conclusion. Support with language lets students concentrate on the quality of their reasoning.
Feedback should address the strength of the reasoning first, then the evidence, and then clarity. A comment asking how the student would respond to the strongest counterargument can push thinking further. Specific, question-based feedback helps students develop a more balanced view. Over time, these skills carry into debates, civic discussions, and everyday decision-making.
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